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Elara is summoned into a Harmonizer compliance review where civic materials are examined for affective irregularities around mapped transit nodes. The chamber's language is procedural and clean, making the danger feel almost deniable. As the supervisor displays the first anomalies, Elara recognizes her own hidden memorials being translated into defect categories.
Elara followed the junior cartographers through the white doors with her slate held against her ribs, its edge pressing a neat line into her palm. The review chamber smelled faintly of warmed laminate and ionized dust. No one spoke beyond the necessary greetings. NeuralSync had made them efficient even in their silences, each breath shallow, each chair drawn back with the same careful scrape.
At the front wall, transit overlays waited in layers of pale blue and gray, the Republic's arteries reduced to harmless lines. The Harmonizer supervisor stood beneath the seal, hands folded, face composed into civic patience. This was a minor matter, she told them. A maintenance irregularity. Certain public materials had coincided with measurable deviations in transit-adjacent affect, and classification would assist corrective routing.
Styluses clicked open around the table, dry and small as insect legs. Elara lowered her eyes to her slate at the correct interval.
The first projection brightened. A factory district, seven years revised, showed a smudge of green where loading yards should have sealed the block. The old public garden was almost gone, but not entirely. She had left only the shape of a bed, the memory of a path between benches. The supervisor named it decorative residue.
Another image replaced it: a pedestrian route bending toward an arcade no citizen could enter anymore. Inefficient pathing. Then the square with its former border still breathing beneath the approved grid. Obsolete landmark artifact.
Elara kept her fingers still.
When the flower appeared, faded nearly to nothing under the transit lines, her brother's melody opened inside her with such precision that for one instant she could smell rain on his coat. NeuralSync answered with cool pressure behind her eyes. Her breathing evened. Her mouth became calm. On the wall, grief waited to be classified.